I first have to tell you guys that the reason for this post is Purple Heart. Yes! She is the one who is behind this post. I dunno if I should dedicate this post to her.
In a moment of foolishness, I asked her something........This is what she had....poor PH to think of me like her... thinks that I have loads of creativity...One thing is for Sure.. you would have to eat your words......you know why? Am gonna make my very first attempt.
Very First Attempt! At What? he he he.....in writing a Poem.......You dont believe it? Check What the PH had to say for me here. So blame PH and Not me!!!!
Now those who have got a strong heart read.....else please close the window... I tell you that is the best way to have a good day rather than having a heart attack.......
So what can I write about???
I am in my terrace...
Lying down
With tears rolling down
Staring at those stars
Thinking of you
Then came a gentle breeze
Soothing my thoughts
I heard a song
From god knows where
Reminding me of you
The hours we spent
Listening to
I was Lying down
Staring at those Stars
Thinking of you
We were parted
But we know
We love one another
Where are you dear?
Are you the shining Star that I see?
Are you the silence that I hear?
Are you the bird that Chirps in my window?
Or are you the Gentle Breeze that I feel?
I am searching for you every where
Knowing well that
You are here...
With me...In my heart and mind
Now here I am
Lying down in the Terrace
Staring at those Stars
Thinking of you
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I really found out how you wrote the poem, U first wrote a paragraph and then split it into 3 word lines each... correcta......
For Example
I am in my terrace...Lying down With tears rolling down Staring at those stars Thinking of you. Then came a gentle breeze Soothing my thoughts I heard a song From god knows where.
This para u broke into 6 lines making it a poem
Nice poem.
But i am still in dilemma that if the lover is still alive? Please don't make any changes to poem because of the question.
I am sorry never saw your comment @ PH's blog.
you can continue writing poem cos they are no cryptic. and good to understand for a lay man like me!!
Ohh mine..!! This is gorgeous !! I love simple and touch-to-reality sort of poetries, and this is something I thoroughly enjoyed, absolutely !!!
And kudos to me, yayyy, for driving the inspiration in u !
By the ways, one tiny weeny qn...whts the thing u were listening to (para 3, Line 3 ??) :)
Great job !! :) And keep going !
Dont tell me this is your first attemt..even if its so who cares..Its all there deep in your heart to go over it again and again and again...lovely
TC
CU
very touchy... hmm my conception that girls make good poets so very true :)
Shiva: Maanatha Vaangatha...
S4n705h: Its not about my lover..its about my Elder Sister who passed away a few years back...
Ph: Thank you soo much... And the song that I was listening to was
Vandanam En Vandanam from Vaazhvey Maayam....ITs my sis very fav. song
Compassion Unlimited: So true to your name. Honeslty speaking this is my very first attempt
Vignes: Thank Thank Thank Thank YOuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
thaaaliyaaaa.. did you get drubnk b4 writing this one?
Chriz: Jeeez how did you guess that? Oops .........Ayyo you have got so much brains man!!!! I wonder what would India do without you???
i do believe that you are a much better writer than me. And i am not being humble. its just that i know what i am.
The quality of the your post is much above than mine.
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